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CONDESCENDING LEAPS

avatar by julita
May 12th, 2009 at 11:05 AM
Filed under: Arts & Entertainment
Hyphened bodies
through unlocked doors
Woo designing thoughts
Eyes of wandering maze

A morphic sphere
in the dunes violet night
unfettered and unseen
whispering sweet sonnets

Shallow breaths
Mind etching paths
Into the dawning of light
leaps wings of the delta

Dandelion I seek
The knight of the evening
Once, upon rivers deep
moment of moments to remember


Written: Nov 14, 2008
By: julita t. santos



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avatar julita on May 13th, 2009 at 8:04 PM
 

Hi Rob. It was memorable I guess. I made it up. Serious....Of spiritual friends. What do you really think of it?

avatar Retired_Navy_Rob on May 13th, 2009 at 3:10 PM
 

sorry for the spelling.......Memorable is what I meant

avatar Retired_Navy_Rob on May 13th, 2009 at 3:09 PM
 

I guess the good thing is that it was memberable

avatar julita on May 13th, 2009 at 2:06 PM
 

I did and sorry for that. It really is Deja vu...Skip it and I'll get something else. Thanks Rob.

avatar Retired_Navy_Rob on May 13th, 2009 at 1:55 PM
 

did you post this once before or is this just Déjà vu?

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